Re: [PATCH] Documentation/git-commit: rewrite to make it more end-user friendly.

From: Alan Chandler <alan@chandlerfamily.org.uk>
Date: 2006-12-10 20:17:29
On Saturday 09 December 2006 05:48, Junio C Hamano wrote:

>  OPTIONS
>  -------
>  -a|--all::
> -	Update all paths in the index file.  This flag notices
> -	files that have been modified and deleted, but new files
> -	you have not told git about are not affected.
> +	Tell the command to automatically stage files that have
> +	been modified and deleted, but new files you have not
> +	told git about are not affected.

The "but" in this sentence doesn't seem right to me, I would either 
use "although", or slightly better (IMHO) make it two sentences

Tell the command to automatically stage files that have been modified 
and deleted.  Note that files that you have not told git about are not 
included with this option.

-- 
Alan Chandler
http://www.chandlerfamily.org.uk
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